Conclusion to essay writing

Hi simon I've got a question regarding your rewording in the introduction part - "In recent years, extreme sports have become increasingly popular, and some people argue that governments should prohibit them", and then the second sentence follows up - "I completely disagree with the idea that these sports are too dangerous" - While this was the answer to the claim made in the topic question but was irrelevant to your first rewording sentence, isn't related to it. I mean you haven't reworded the reason as to why people think that they should be prohibited. Is what you did acceptable or it would be better to add the following - "...should prohibit them because they present greater risk for injuries and lethal accidents."

The conclusion should match the introduction in terms of the ideas presented and the argument put forward. Sometimes you will find that the process of writing has changed what you have argued and so it will be necessary to go back and reword the introduction. Finally, the conclusion is not the place in your essay to introduce new information or new ideas: these should be in the body of your essay. Example of an essay conclusion 1 Essay Question: : Italy on the eve of 1860 has often been described as an unlikely nation. Why? Before 1860, only a tiny minority of the population believed that Italy could ever become a unified nation under one Italian ruler. Yet, despite this belief and the many obstacles blocking the path to unification such as differences and suspicion between the many regions of the peninsula, the lack of planning and common goals that saw many uprisings fail and the divergent views and politics amongst the men who fought for unity, the Piedmont region emerged "...as the nucleus around which the rest of Italy could gather" (Mack Smith, 1959: 17). On March 17, 1861, the Kingdom of Italy was proclaimed. Italy was no longer a geographical expression, it was a nation. reference to essay question
reiteration of thesis point
overview of main arguments explaining the obstacles to Italy's unification
concluding comment and reference to essay question 1 This essay has been adapted from material developed by R. Woodward-Kron, E. Thomson & J. Meek (2000) Academic Writing: a language based guide (CD-ROM), University of Wollongong

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Never apologize for or otherwise undercut the argument you've made or leave your readers with the sense that "this is just little ol' me talking." Leave your readers with the sense that they've been in the company of someone who knows what he or she is doing. Also, if you promised in the introduction that you were going to cover four points and you covered only two (because you couldn't find enough information or you took too long with the first two or you got tired), don't try to cram those last two points into your final paragraph. The "rush job" will be all too apparent. Instead, revise your introduction or take the time to do justice to these other points.

Conclusion to essay writing

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